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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Hi! Thanks for swapping!

I really enjoyed this. I've always been in awe of people who can portray any sort of emotion is just 500 words, and you definitely did that. This ship is actually really interesting-it makes sense in a strange, twisted sort of way. I like that you had Gellert in love against his will, so to speak. He didn't like being in love with Arania, but he couldn't help it. The descriptions of carving his heart out and the broken mirror were two of my favorite parts. They both had great, vivid imagery, which I absolutely adore.

You did have a few awkwardly worded sentences here and there, but I think that was most because you were trying to take out conjunctions and such to make it fit in 500 words. It's definitely something to watch out for though :)

Overall, it was a beautiful story with a great ship. Excellent job!

-Naida

Author's Response: Hey!
Thank you! It is a weird, twisted shipping isn't it? I think it's just the thought of Gellert loving anymore- I mean it's more absurd then the thought of Voldemort loving someone.

Yeah, i read through it today and picked up a few things but I kind of had to so that it would fit to 500 words :)

Thank you!
Jaz


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