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Review:In The Shadows I Dwell says:
Hi,
I'm back with your final review as part of your prize, I've really enjoyed reading this so far and I'm looking forward to coming back once I'm done with all the reviews I'm writing up for this to come back and finish it off, because I'm really excited by everything that has happened so far and what could possibly happen in the future chapters especially considering I hardly know who to trust with the man from the Ministry again in this chapter, it makes me wonder who is betraying them especially considering it doesn't at this stage seem to be Scorpius.

The introduction of their opposition was interesting as well, particularly seeing how everything is all coming together with the Ministry man piece by piece, and it's easy to see that he has something planned for them, although we know it's revenge, I want to know what it's revenge for and how exactly he plans to achieve it, I also wonder what is so important about the statue, or whether it is actually important at all, but I guess we'll have to wait and see!

Once again, I really liked your writing style in this chapter, and I noticed that it seemed to flow really well. The characters and their conversations also worked quite well, particularly the one at the end between Rose and Lorcan, with each chapter more and more about the characters and their relationships is being revealed and it's really good to see how they react around one another in different situations. Overall I think this is a really great story, it's such a brilliant idea and is written so well I just want to keep on reading to find out what happens! So I will be back to finish it I promise!

Congratulations once again for coming third!
~ In The Shadows I Dwell

Author's Response: Oh my giddy gosh- your first paragraph is one sentence and I read it all in one garbled mush. Bear with, I'm going to read it again.

Okay! You don't think it's Scorpius, huh? Well, unfortunately, all the next gens do :) I'm keeping schtum either way.

The Ministry man is seriously evil, and I'll keep drip-feeding you guys info about him to keep you all interested :D
But revenge... not saying.
The statue. not saying.

I'm really glad you liked this chapter and I'm really really happy you want to continue with the story!

Thanks for the review, and looking forward to any more challenges you put up :D


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