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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
For some reason, imagining Dumbledore in a khaki uniform makes me giggle uncontrollably.

This was another fascinating chapter, and I apologize for my delay in continuing to read this story - school got in the way. Things are finally starting to get rolling! I like how everyone's beginning to plan and we get glimpses into the various people that are to be involved.

It's nice to finally see Grindewald and Hitler interact, and everyone's reactions to Dumbledore were amusing, but I'm glad they all seem to be on board and don't think he's crazy.

I wonder if there will be more from Lydia and Daisy. It was nice to see them discussing boys and all of that nonsense in the midst of the war. I have a feeling you don't introduce people for the sake of it, so I'm going to hold onto the hope that they will be coming back.

Hopefully I can get some more of this story read while I'm on spring break between completing assignments and writing my own stories. You definitely have a really interesting story on your hands with such a perfect precision, weaving history and magic together seamlessly. Well done!

Author's Response: I love that image of Dumledore as well. I picture him at this age basically looking like a typical history professor definetley not fitting in with military discipline.

Grindelwald and Hitler are basically allies of convenience trying to use each other for their own ends, so hopefully that came across.

Daisy and Lydia definetely have more of a role to play.

Thanks a lot for the review!

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