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Review:Erised says:
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This was an awesome first chapter. The dialogue was great - varied styles are always nice to see. The characterisation of Phillipia and Albus are great too! I like how she isn't the whole 'typical Slytherin' character, and it seems like things have changed in Hogwarts. You also introduced a good amount of characters so that the reader isn't overwhelmed :)

What I liked the most though is that this was FUNNY! Like I actually laughed at it loads! The witty one-liners and Scorpius and the chocolate bunny incident are all just hilarious. It's really awesome to see humour well done, so great work there.

There were a couple errors, like you/you're and stuff but that's nothing. This is a great story!

Author's Response: Hey :) Thanks so much for saying that. I'm so glad you liked the dialogue, I had a lot of fun writing. Thank you, I tried to make them different and yes, things have changed in Hogwarts which is shown throughout the story. Wow! I'm so glad that you laughed! Thank you, I'm happy you think it is well done. And I'll look through and see if I can fix them. Thanks so much for the review and I hope you have a great day! xx

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