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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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It looks like you did a really good job of capturing Lily's emotions in this story, and she was instantly very sympathetic to the readers.

In most stories, the main characters always seem to end up together, so it was a nice change to see some unrequieted love, since obviously things don't always work out for people in real life.

There was a nice and easy flow to the story, and though it was short, there were a lot of feelings packed into it.

Author's Response: Hey :) Thank you for the review.

I'm glad you thought I did a good job with this. Originally I wasn't going to post it because I'd missed the deadline for the challenge but I'm glad I did because of all the positive feedback that I have received.

I don't generally mind that generally the main characters get together but I wanted to give a different spin on things mainly to just add more variety within my writing styles.

I'm glad you thought there were a lot of feelings packed into it!

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