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Review:charlottetrips says:
Very nice. I like that you've taken the time to show us what happened in the castle before and after Sirius was taken. Again, I'd just like to comment on the fact that I really do appreciate that you've made Sirius have family and people within his family home that care for him. This is a significant difference (aside from the Marauders and other Order of the Phoenix members) from the books.

“Until you come of age, my dear nephew, I shall act as king in your father’s stead.” - Cygnus is arrogant and I will enjoy seeing him fall (if that is the fate he has ahead of him). He's a villain whose driven by power and so far you've made him out to be clever but unfortunately a bit pompous and careless.

Kreacher, surprisingly, is someone that I'm liking a lot. His care for the two boys and his loyalty to the dead king are admirable. I'm actually going to enjoy seeing further scenes with him.

The emotion that you laid out in the story is believable and really draws me in. Regulus' upset over his brother's disappearance, Kreacher's concern, it's all very well written!

xChar

Author's Response: I thought it was important to see how Sirius's disappearance affected other characters and not just him. I can't imagine Sirius growing up to be the king he needs to be if he grew up in a home bereft of love and care; it's definitely necessary for him to grow and mature.

Cygnus is such an arrogant snot, isn't he? I can't tell you if he'll fall or not, but it's always fun to imagine his demise, isn't it? He's definitely very two-faced, but you're right - he can be rather careless, and that will come back to bite him in the butt.

I'm so happy you like Kreacher! He's a favorite of mine to write, and I want people to connect with him and really feel for him because he's so torn between doing what is expected of him and what he wants to do.

Thank you so much for your lovely reviews. It means a lot to me!

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