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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
This was another chapter amazingly done. I honestly do see this almost like a painting at Hogwarts where the charcters move, all the splashes of color and high detailed descriptiveness.

I really love Ariana. She is an amazingly sweet girl...woman. I thought your characterization of her carried over from your previous chapters which was really great. It helped link them all together.

I think that the development of the story is progressing at a nice pace. It's a new place that we aren't completly familar with so it's nice to see that the flow of the words and story aren't being rushed through.

I did want to point out a sentence that completly captivated me...

"Every time I held my hand to their weakened hearts, I took a piece of them with me, feeling their nostalgic last pulse in the palm of my hand."

It's such a beautiful sentence and highly relatable to real life as well. I think a lot of us feels like a piece of us dies when someone we love passes on. So I found this to be very moving and real.

You're an amazing writer and I cannot wait to see what else occurs in this white world that Ariana is aging in. My curiousity is highly sparked! =)

Keep up the great work!! Let me know when your next chapter has been validated. I would be more than happy to return to read and review some more.


P.s. I am adding this to one of my favorites. Just wanted to let you know.

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