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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Ring!
Quite lovely, my dear. You did an excellent job with the challenges!

I like Taylor Swift, but don't follow her enough to know the quote, but something tells me that you did a wonderful job with it. :)

I loved how you wrote the Romeo and Juliet storyline. Because really, her having him read them was supposed to be a good thing, but what it really did was have him leaving her, not wanting anything close to their end in a tragedy of death. I found it very compelling and thought provoking and ironic.

I loved that she poked him in the ribs when she found him watching through the window. It was a perfect little greeting that sent a shock through him.

I'm sure she saw right through his lie about being with someone... especially about loving in the present tense. She's the brightest of course.

And I also loved how you had the Daily Prophet tell him what had happened the night before... and that she said no to Ron. What a huge relief!

This was so beautifully sad for Draco and Hermione, but ended with hope.
Great job, Ring Felton!

Dark Whisper
P.S. I'm sorry I was so late with your challenge, but two chapters are up now. My apologies. I hope you like it.

Author's Response: Dark Whisper,
Oh my goodness! I've been so late in reading and reviewing your story, I'm so sorry! I got your message on the forums and I meant to read it right away but I got so caught up in a bunch of work and I've only just responded to your message a few days ago. I'm terribly sorry, forgive me? D:

Oh! You're honestly so sweet with your compliments, thank you so much! I'm glad you picked up on the Romeo and Juliet plot I tried to add in to the story, I wasn't sure if anyone would really think it of any importance! xD

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for taking the time to read it and review it. It means a lot to me, and your comments are always such good interpretations of the story and sweet. I love reading them and they always make my day! So thank you very much Dark Whisper!

I have some time on my hands now (such a luxury these days LOL) so I'm off to read your new stories and catch myself up on Delilah's Black Book of Poems, I think I'm quite a few chapters behind on that as well D: I'm very excited to see what you've written!!

-Ring




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