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Review:SakuraSou says:
Woah! This was one awesome first chapter. Right of the bat, the dream at the beginning had me at the edge of my seat. The descriptions were superb- I especially loved the line about the dirt dragging her down to its depth. The whole thing just drew me in instantly.

The dialogue was excellent, Aria sounded very real and believable. I was surprised to find out that the dream would be relevant so soon (if indeed the dream is referring to Scorpius in the forbidden forest, which it seems like it could be), but it was a pleasant surprise, it really makes me want to know more, like, right now lol.

Spelling and grammar were great. I only noticed one teeny mistake which was 'fools' which should be 'fool's' I think, but honestly, I was so absorbed in the story it didn't matter.

The whole concept of Rose seeing the future is really unique and very intriguing. Really loved this and I am hoping that you continue with it :D

10/10

x SakuraSou
Hufflepuff

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