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Review:BKL8008 says:
Ah, one of my favorite things to write! Battle scenes. I've often used the "attack the students" theme, and had a melee break out! This was a great touch with Josh, though, having an accidental Sectumsempra (dark magic, Snape once said) break out of him. There's good capture of emotion in here, too, pitting friends against one another. This would have to be hard for the boys to face. Such a great chapter, I could go on and on.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. I'm not sure Joshua did, though, and I don't think he quite knows just what curse he's just fired at Isaac.

I think the characters are getting good depth here too - I hope I don't lose the strand of the storyline too much... it felt like the last chapter (5) didn't really go anywhere so I need to guard against any stagnation of plot - if I find any time to write any time soon!

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