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Review:SiriuslyPeeved says:
Wow, this knocked me over! Beautiful work Char.

You know, it's a demented idea :) but I can actually see this happening... Of course Bellatrix would not be the one to raise a child. And leaving Lucius to explain it to Bellatrix -- totally in character, even though I always imagined Bellatrix & Narcissa to be close as sisters, Bellatrix is crazy after all.

I absolutely loved the Azkaban scene... gorgeously frightening.


One tiny tiny typo in the chapter title (Disintegration) otherwise it is perfectly put together. 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that the story was somewhat plausible. Bella would be one to leave someone in the dust in her pursuit for power, even with her own sister though there was evidence of a little closeness in the books (ish).

Gar! I keep meaning to fix that typo and forgetting...thanks :)

xChar


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