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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Amazing =)

I really like your characterization. They are all wonderful characters and flow and mesh well with one another. They are believable and relatable which is great.

I did notice some minor things with sentences where you either left out a word or worded it differently. Looking back I can't find them right of hand because they are that minor. So just a heads up.

I like Dirk. I think he's an interesting fellow. I am not completly sure how I feel about him yet. I think I will wait and see on him. I also like how you subtly showed a peak of interest in Rose from Scorpius. I love reading this story because it's always something new each time. Ooo...a Vampire. I wasn't expecting him. =)

It's well developed, described and is paced well. You're not rushing the relationship with Scorpius and Rose which is something that needs to build up over time.

I can't wait to read about Quidditch and what happens in the next chapters of your story.

Keep up the great work!

-SR17

Author's Response: Lurve your reviews! Don't worry there shall be quidditch in the next chapter! Thank you so much! I thought I'd add a vampire to shake it up a bit.

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