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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
Wow this chapter really added some new dimensions to the story. I like how you showed us different points of view, letting us see both the vampires and the resistance.

You created some very interesting characters here. When you're using this many OC's, its important to develop them well since the reader won't know anyhting about them in advance, and so far so good where that's concerned.

I'm really impresed with how you've been able to pretty much create your own era and universe from scratch, you obviously put a lot of thought and planning into this.

The story continues to flow very well, and engross the reader with its potential suspense and sense of danger. Plus your depiction of vampires seems so fitting. You're a much better writer than Stephanie Meyer in my opinion.

Author's Response: Hi again! Though for the most part, the vampires are to be regarded as Evil Beings that show no mercy, they do have some soft spots. Because my idea for how they become vampires is through killing (whether it be accidental or not) is when the change is forced upon them if they have the gene.

It's almost like writing an entire original fiction. I'm glad you think I did good on that because that was a concern of mine. Believability is key to making a story like this work so I strive to keep that up at all times!

Haha, thank you for the compliment, I really appreciate this review!!


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