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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Megthechef,

Ah! I saw your little author note! LOL! It wasn't terrible at all! I loved it! As I do love it when they fight a bit. Who doesn't like the heat between these two? :)

I really liked his 'passive aggressiveness' toward her. It made me smile at his quiet jabs. And I really liked it when he admitted that it wasn't just about the money. Awe... And they kissed ever so slightly... Awe...

I especially loved your background of him losing Pansy and Astoria to Seth and the various reasons why they didn't work out. I could imagine Astoria trying to come back to him! VERY WELL DONE! BRILLIANT background story. Losing Hermione to Seth would sure set him on fire! Excellent!

Thanks for placing a reminder in the chapter of Seth being an heir. It is good to do this for your readers from time to time.

Great job, Meg... I'm so glad that you did not take my advice. Shows you how much I know. XD

Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Dark,

I always love a little heat between these two. Haha It's the spice of life. :)

I thought a little 'passive aggressiveness' was warranted. Haha. Isn't that what ever girl would want to hear from him. :)

The background story was something I threw in there in the end. I wasn't sure if I should but, I'm glad I did. I had to have something happen to Astoria because i felt the need to explain why she didn't become Draco's wife.

As for Seth (evil) we haven't seen the last of him yet. He isn't going to give up on that money so easily. Yes, Seth knows about the inheritence that Draco is going to get.

Even though I didn't take all of your advice I extremely glad you gave it because it helped remind me that Draco shouldn't be horrible mean to her because that is not his style. So even if it didn't seem like i took your advice, i did. :)

Thank you again for you lovely review! I love reading your reviews. They make me happy. :)

Meg


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