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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
I'm here from the forums with your review!

First of all, this looks like a really unique idea, we don't really see too much of this type of story. I reall like the fact that you are portraying the vampires as sinister and plotting, you know the way vampires are supposed to be portrayed, not like twilight.

This prologue gave us just the right amount of information to explain how the world came to be the way it is, but it wasn't too much to overwhelm us or slow down the flow.

Great start so far, definetely made me want to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hi there! :)

I'm glad you think it's original! Even though there aren't many stories about futuristic settings or vampires on HPFF, there is a lot about that in fiction writing, so I'm trying to stay as original as possible and not skive ideas off anyone! :P

That worried me a bit at first, too. Some people thought I didn't give enough of a backstory, but I'm really only wanting to release that in small bursts so it doesn't all come out at once! But I'm glad you thought it worked!

Thanks so much for the wonderful review! :)


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