Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:TheGoldenKneazle says:
This was so beautiful! While I've read a few Sirius/OC stories before, they have never felt half so like they could be canon, as this piece did.

I loved the way that you slowly built up Sirius and Win's relationship, with his memories of how they met colouring the reasons for why they were perfect. I love how you had them meeting because she had put out a rumour to protect muggles - it was such a wonderful way for them to meet, and I can only imagine that someone who had done that sort of thing (protecting others, etc) could be right for somebody as proud yet volatile as Sirius.

The way their wedding was so perfectly simple, with only the best people there, was also very Sirius-ish; at least, very like the Sirius you characterised here. I loved how you made him very true to the Sirius that JKR writes, and not at all like the ever-popular "player Sirius". It so much more true, to the point that when Win was murdered, his reaction seemed all the more real.

I love how you brought it around to him helping Harry at the end; telling him to not be scared and welcome death the way Win had helped him. It was so sad how he had been unforgiving of himself for all those years, but seemed all the more natural when Win didn't need to forgive him... it was just so gorgeous and wonderful and ahh :3

~TGK

Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted this to fit into canon somehow even though we don't know of any close relationships that Sirius formed except for the Marauders.

Ah, your whole review just made me smile because it's so nice and lovely! You really pointed out all the points that I was so proud and happy about and I feel like you totally got what I was trying to write! Thank you!!

xChar


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 685
Submit Report: