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Review:Aphoride says:
Wow. Just... wow. I'm sorry in advance if this review is mostly mindless squeeing or very short :P

This is just amazing. Your writing alone is beautiful. It flows so wonderfully and I can imagine everything exactly as you describe it - I can see the lake and the orchards and the hill and I can almost feel like I'm actually there watching her. It's incredible.

I love the way you've brought Ariana to life as well. You've really highlighted how young she was when she died (she was a teenager, I think) and how that's affected her, as well as the memories of what happened to her and what she did. Even though this chapter was mostly description, you really give us a feel for her character.

This really, really intrigues me. You haven't given much away about the plot but that's a good thing - I want to know where you're going with this.

Ah, it's so beautiful! I'll definitely try and find you in the review battle again (otherwise I'll forget, unfortunately) and come back to this ;)

Love it!
Aph xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I feel so comfortable writing in this world again, even though I didn't write anything about it for over a year while I was struggling with the first plot I had when I wrote the first version. It's nice to start over again and write it properly this time.

She was not only young in age, she was young mentally too, I think. Circumstances never really allowed her to grow up when she was alive, so she's had to grow up after she died. That's perhaps one of the reasons she ages after death instead of staying in the same shape like everyone else - she never reached her full potential while she lived, so she's getting that chance now.

Thank you so much for the review!

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