Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
This was again a great chapter! I loved seeing the banter between Rose and Hugo. They are so relatable. =)

I also liked how we were introduced to James's girlfriend, Johanna and Alice Longbottom. It's great to see that the characters have friends outside of the family realm.

Your characterization and descriptiveness...wonderful. I did notice one thing in the begining that kind of slowed me down..."She had been woken from her when a cardboard box attempted to take her place on the couch." This sentence was a bit confusing. I think you might have meant that she had been woken up from her sleep? Just wanted to point that out. Other then that it flowed naturally.

I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the little bit of a teaser we get with Scorpius and Rose when he stops by with flowers and champange!! =)

I know I've said this before, but I am really excited to see where this goes and how it all develops. You're doing a wonderful job!

Keep up the great work!

-SR17

P.s. Thank you by the way for being one of my repeat review requesters. I love reading and reviewing! I just wish I could write as well as I think I review!

Author's Response: Hehe, aww thank you!!
I will definitely get to fixing that as quick as I can thank you! I really love your reviews like a ton, they are awesome and helpful. I will surely be rerequesting soon! :D


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 622
Submit Report: