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Review:Aderyn says:
Hello.

Wow, this story is certainly really creepy. It adds a whole new layer to Bellatrix's twisted personality. Creepy, creepy stuff.

Anyways, it's an interesting idea to imagine Draco as Bellatrix's son. The way you wrote it seems plausible, especially because of your characterization of Bellatrix. She doesn't want the child, and later on, she despises her son.

The last line is particularly apt, and probably my favorite in this story.

Author's Response: Thank you. I did want to bring out the "creep" in Bellatrix as she really is a disturbing character. It's always fun to break down the craziness of someone and see where that leads.

I loved writing that last line! Thank you for liking it too!


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