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Review:megthechef43 says:
melian,

Even though I wasn't a big fan of Ron and Hermione getting back together I guess I should have taken in to account that neither are quitters and they weren't going to let their marriage slip that easily. It says a lot about Hermione to be able to look pass Ron's worng doings but still not accept them and thus showing him if he ever cheats again she will leave him forever. I love the way you handled this.

Pansy is happy with her son. It was great to read that even Pansy believes her son is a miracle and she can be happy with out a man. Well you know. I'm glad she accepted Ron desicion.

Great Story. It was well written and enjoyable to read. It brought out a lot of emotions.

Megthechef43

Author's Response: thank you so much! Like I said before, writing a believable Ron/Pansy was a bit of a stretch, but once I worked out a way to make it fit canon (I'm really a canon freak and probalby couldn't write AU if my life depended on it) i was able to go from there. Of course, Ron and Hermione are together in the epilogue to DH, which means taht she had to take him back, but like you said neither are quitters and that meant it was a believable proposition. Sure, Ron did the wrong thing, but once he owned up to that and renounced his ways, and she could see evidence that he was back on the straight and narrow, she agreed to give him another chance. With strict conditions, of course.

As for Pansy, well she was quite happy with how it all ended up. She knew Ron would never leave Hermione for her, and evne when Hermione kicked him out she didn't really think that she would have a happily ever after with him. She understood what sort of person he was. Instead, she made the most out of what he was able to give her and was content with that. The funny thing about this story is that I never liked Pansy in the books, but writing about her made her much more human and relateable. I don't really know how canon my version of her is, but it seemed to work with what we do know.

Thanks again for the reviews. Not many people read this story so it's always great to get feedback on it.

cheers, Mel


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