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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:

Just caught this while I was browsing, desperate for something to read before I went to bed (Its about 12:40 right now, aha) and I was not at all disappointed. I was curious to see where you went with this after Pansy decided not to reenter society again. And I really appreciated the slow, easy glide of the time passing and how bitter she was to note that her own life had seemed to stall. I was a bit empathetic over how lonely she was and very concerned as I kept reading about how she sent letters and gifts to Draco. It was slightly uncomfortable but I think that might have been what you were going for, though I did not expect Draco to actually visit. That was hard to read but her pain was evident and the fact that she prepared to get better but have one night of misery for herself was gripping. Loved it entirely and I can't wait to read on and see where she goes from here and how the trip to see her father will affect her.
Much love,

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing again! I'm very pleased that you liked this chapter and appreciated the slow passing of time. It's an interesting and necessary skill to be able to show the passing of time without losing the flow of the story and I'm glad it came through well.

Yes, I didn't mean for Pansy's girfts and letters to be comfortable because it (to me at least) showed the depth of her desperation and devotion towards Draco.

You'll get to see the trip to Azkaban next chapter which I will have hopefully finished soon.

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