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Review:Ashling586 says:
March Gryff review:
To be truthful I was a bit confused for most of this chapter. I had to re-read the first little paragraph two times before I understood what was going on. I am not sure if it was all the repetition of the "began" that threw me off or just the general wording. However, I thought that the story line itself was pretty nice. I could see where you were going. The further I read the more I was able to understand where you were going. The meeting of the two at the end was much better than the beginning.
I think that with a slight rewording at the beginning, then the whole chapter would flow better. I do like that you decided to do a story that revolves around an adult Rose and Scorpius. Most of the new generation stories I have come across have been centered with them in school. I really feel that this story could develop into something more as you go.

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