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Review:Ashling586 says:
I really liked the idea of George taking a trip down memory lane by actually visiting each location that Fred and him had been together. It was a nice way for him to say goodbye to someone who was so important to him, and I liked how you decided to portray the way George is feeling during the story. However I have to say that there were a lot of fragmented sentences and the grammar could use some work. The transitions from scene to scene could be a bit smoother.
Overall I liked the story enough to over look any grammar issues. Good job.

Author's Response: Yeah, the literal trip down memory lane :D I'm glad you liked that.
Thanks for the criticism, although I will say that I mostly intended for the fragmented sentences to convey the story as if it was George's thoughts.
Thanks for the review, and I'm glad that overall you liked it :D

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