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Review:Selene says:
I just realized I never reviewed this. -sheepish-

I remember watching you as you wrote this, the frustration in your voice at times and the doubt. You pulled through and you were strong and this chapter is fantastic. The characterizations were wonderful, if a little OOC at times, but I know that is what you wanted & needed for this. And Neville...Neville is love. I truly believe this could expand into a short story or one-shot collection.

If you expand this story, or the next time you post something which I hope is soon, I wouldn't mind seeing a little more of Hermione's, or the character of the submission, thoughts or feelings. And as some CC, remember to use some more of the senses to help paint a mental image. For the first person POV, I bow to you oh great one. You seem to have a good grasp of it. I could continue for ages on this but I think you know what I'm trying to say.

Great job hon, and I can't wait to see whats next for Hermione and Neville!!

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