Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:adoranymph says:
wow that was brilliant, with a brilliant last line "a death eater had gotten the best of him. oh, how he hated it". loved that. and i loved how you upped the tension and drama by giving mad-eye the upper hand for just a few moments before he finally gets caught, and i also liked all of the pictures of death eaters hanging on his walls laughed when he was tied up.

i also liked that line about one man's mess being another man's filing system, mostly because i can relate lol. :)

Author's Response: Cheers for the review, I really appreciate that you took the time to read chapter two as I know you are so busy at the moment.

I am glad you liked it and that you liked the ending. I had to change the ending because other people had thought he had died at the end, and obviously he hasn't (or otherwise that would defy canon which I refuse to do), so I had to do a re-write, so I am happy you like the new ending. :)

I can relate as well to the mess being a filling system; there are books, notes, and loose sheets of paper flung in a mess all over my bedroom; but I know exactly where everything is and can retrieve them effortlessly, regardless of what anyone says!!!

Anyway, OK, I will admit I am going into withdrawl from the lack of the latest "Moonlight" chapter, but no pressure or anything at all, I know you're really busy. I'll continue to wait patiently!! :) I'm trying to do a new novella length fic myself at the minute, but I had to promise myself that I wouldn't submit chapter one until I had at least ten chapters finished, just because I want to avoid being under pressure to update and having no time whatsoever to write, so I completely understand where you're coming from, so no pressure at all on Moonlight, I'll wait patiently for it!

Thanks again for the review, much appreciated! Oh yeah, I have a new one-shot appearing soon, once it passes the queue (but you don't have to look at it at all, if you don't want to, that's cool, honest!).

Hope work and everything is treating you well ;)

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 650
Submit Report: