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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Hi!

I'm not sure how much of this story is in Bill's head and how much is real to be honest. Did you mean it to be real? I'd love to know what was going through /your/ head when you wrote this.

I must admit, I thoroughly enjoyed the beginning. It was such an interesting concept. When you first decsribed the 'woman' Bill saw, I thought it was a Veela, not death.

I think you characterised Death really.interestingly. He (she?) didn't seem to have one fixed character, but lots of different ways to react. With the giglling (I found that mega creepy) and then changing to a man... This is the sort of story I'd love to write myself!

I wonder, why did you choose to write about death? You haven't put it as a concept, but as a person. And strangely that makes the reader think about the concept even more, if that makes sense to you...!

But then, when it got to the part with Death, Voldemort and Bill it seemed to go downhill a little in quality of writing, and became rather confusing and less 'realistic' (not that it's particularly realistic at all but I like that. magic isn't realistic.)

But wow, you had shivers going down my spine in parts of this. Really loved reading and reviewing!

Let me know when your new story comes out so I can review it! You have four more reviews to spend :)

lwg x

Author's Response: Sorry I took forever to respond to this! I read it and then forgot I hadn't responded :/

Well yes it is all 'real', but it is quite different I suppose :P I say anything can happen in the wizarding world though :P I don't really know what was going through my head, I just loved the idea of writing about Death (he's in the story that I'm yet to post) so I wanted to test him out in this one shot.

I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning!! Ooh that's good, I kind of didn't want it to be revealed right away!

It was very fun, you should give it a go! Honestly I don't know where the idea first came from, I've had a plunny since last year about Death that I've written a bit of, so I really don't remember :P But he's my favourite character to write :D Haha yes that does make sense!

Yep, that's probably the part of the story where I'm not happy with it :P For the challenge we had to make them swap bodies and I think that's the part I ended up struggling with...I found Voldemort really tricky to write for some reason! I might attempt to rewrite it sometime. I hope you weren't too confused though!

Ooh that makes me happy! Well because it worked I mean :P I'm glad you loved it!

I'll definitely let you know! It might be a while though :/ Thank you so much for this review! :D


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