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Review:Moonyxluna says:
At least she won't get fired now! This was a lovely chapter. I really loved how real your writing is here. When Luna was worrying about 'shouldn't have eaten that cake last night' and her thoughts when she was hanging from the tree; the way you wrote it was unemblished and very believable.

Oh, and in regaurds to the previous chapter's note, I think the chapter length is up to you. I personally like really long chapters, but that's just my opinion. The length you have now works as long as you are alright with it. :)

the nargles sound way too adorable. I'm just glad she won't lose her job, and Rolf as well. I had it completely wrong, I was thinking they weren't going to be nargles and the pair would run off together :p I shouldn't doubt Luna! Great chapter! I really liked at the end how she wasn't concerned about the news articles, just proud of herself. Great work!

(moonyxluna, hufflepuff)

Author's Response: I'm sorry for not responding before now!

Thank you! I'm glad you like it so much. And run off together...that would be great ;) I'm not so sure they know each other well enough at the moment to do anything like that though. Again, thank you for the review!


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