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Review:Wildfire Patronus says:
You should see me, I'm practically biting my tongue to stop myself from yelling out loud, "NO, YOU FOOL! DON'T IGNORE THE NOISE!" If you can get someone that worked up you deserve more than a 10/10!
One small thing. When Andy died and Chris healed him it was sort of nonchalant. It's not a big deal or anything but I felt like it could've been more sincere.

Author's Response: Hi it's good to see your coming back to read more.
Wow many thanks for these words. I don't think I've ever got anyone that worked up with one of my stories before. So I was smiling when I saw that this chapter was having quite an effect on you. Thanks for the compliment.
And now that you mention it, I suppose that I could have been more descriptive concerning Andy dying and had the feelings of the others flowing more. In other words more realistic. That will be changed in edits that I'll be doing in the future.

At the moment I'm working on a one shot for a challenge, and I'd like to get it completed and posted today.

Thanks again for the read and review.

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