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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
I really liked this chapter! It was chalked full to the brim of description that I was poisitivly captivated by it. I love Quidditch and you describe it so well for not writing a lot about sports. I was happy to see improvement on this.

Your characterizations were great. I loved to see Rose interacting with her Dad and brother even if they were for mere glimpses at this point. I thought it was very sweet that she would want to try out for her Dad's favorite team. I like it when Rose is described not only as smart, but as tough. You really did a great job making her come alive in this chapter.

Your flow was overall good with one minor exception. Usually when I look at flow of a chapter I look at how it looks not only on the screen while I am reading it, but if words or sentences are making sense. I did stumble while reading through on a minor error..."Honest ludicris in her opinion." I think you meant Honestly. I hope you don't think I am being over critical over one little thing, but I would rather you know it's there then not know.

Again, I really enjoyed this chapter and this story line. Keep up the great work! =)

Author's Response: Aww thanks, and yeah not only do I not usually write sports ever, I don't really know much about sports in general. Lol. I'm so glad that you liked this, the review honestly (lol) makes me giggle with happiness. And know it is totally cool that you mentioned it, otherwise I wouldn't have noticed it to fix it.
Many, many thanks for your review! It was awesomesauce. :D

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