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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
I really liked your first chapter and how you seem to add your own unique twist to the characters. It's original for a ScoRose. I really like the banter bewteen Rose and Albus. It gave your story that comical side yet kept them still as teenagers.

Your dialogue, characterization, flow of the story are really wonderful and apeasing to the readers. The only thing that I can say that it maybe lacked a little in is description. They were at the Three Broomsticks, but it kind of fell alittle flat. Maybe you could've described that atmosphere of it more?

Overall, I thought your first chapter was wonderful. I can't wait to see what you have written next in chapter 2! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Woot! Thank you that was a wonderful review, with the right amount of help/constructive criticism. I will def be going through to see what I can tweak. Much thanks :D

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