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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
This was a very interesting opening. Lorcan's characterization was particualrly strong and very fitting for a 10 year old boy and the perspective he would have. Specifically the way he though of everything as an adventure and had an inflated view of his own skills as a spy.

The descriptions were very well done, and we could get a sense of the nervous tension of waiting by the window and then being intruded upon.

And of course, the last line was a huge revelation and a great cliffhanger. Great start so far!

Author's Response: Thank you. Not sure what it says about me that I seem to write well from the perspective of a ten year old, but I certainly appreciate the feedback :)

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