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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Wow, Hannah, this is absolutely lovely. Your style has grown and matured so much since you first joined (I distinctly remember reading some of your first stories way back when) and this is absolutely incredible.

I don't usually pay a lot of attention to summaries, as I read 90% of stories because of links off the forums, but your summary for this is really what drew me in. It was so lovely and artistic and /poetic/ and hng just amazing in every way. I also love plots like this one. There's so much potential with the Black sisters yet very few write about them, at least not in detail.

This chapter in itself was also great. I personally find it incredibly difficult to write children, because it's hard to get into their minds, but you've done that perfectly here. You managed to capture the mentality of a child so perfectly. The feeling that you're immortal, like nothing can hurt you, all of that was portrayed so well in the tree. You can see Bella already start to be proud, which I also like, and the relationship between the sisters is so sweet, that I can hardly bare to know that it will fall apart in the future.

It really was an incredible chapter.

-Naida

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Naida! That means a lot to me. ♥

I can't quite remember which came first, the summary or the plot - they sort of became tangled up in each other but I thought that it would be fun to play off of their last name so... there you go!

Glad to hear I didn't totally mess it up! :P aha I did my best to channel my inner child. (sadly, I think it was a little too easy... I'm not known for being particularly mature)

Thank you for such a lovely review! :)


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