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Review:starryskies55 says:
Okay. I don't like Mustafa, and I have a feeling that Pansy Sihirbaz will be important.
And my feelings are always right.
Unless they're wrong.
I also don't like the captain. a) he has a goatee and b) who has chairs like that? he must be dodgy.

OOHHH! Your summary has made me expect so much action and you're dragging it out... PLEASE UPDATE THIS IS AWESOME.

(when I say I dislike your characters, I mean they're so well-written they're real to me and on a personal level I don't like them)

Great :D

Author's Response: Hm, I'm keeping my lips sealed regarding Mustafa! He might just be a bumbling, silly character, but I won't say for sure. You are, of course, correct that Pansy Sihirbaz will be important.

The captain is dodgy. :P The goatee has nothing to do with it, other than that he seemed like a goatee sort of man, but the chair definitely was supposed to show a bit of his personality, how he likes to be powerful and in control, but not in a really honest way.

I haven't written the action bits yet, but since I recently signed up for a challenge where I said I'd write a fresh chapter, I have finally begun making edits on this story. I'm a huge writing procrastinator.

Again, thank you so much for the reviews! I really appreciate getting them, and it was such a pleasant surprise. :)

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