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Review:starryskies55 says:
I love that Percy has a briefcase. Also, reminded me ever so much of that Mrs Bucket and RICH-AARRRD comedy thing (Keeping Up Appearances) where they went on the QEII. If you haven't seen it, you're missing out, it's hilarious.

I really like the Platform 9 3/4 thing with the container, and this line 'the barrier wasn't quite solid.' The way I read it in my head was amazing.

I'm glad Percy is off on a holiday! Shame about what's to come, eh? And you've killed off Audrey :(

Amazing. ONTO CHAPTER TWO!

Author's Response: Haha, I have seen Keeping Up Appearances! The local PBS station shows British comedies every Sunday evening, and a friend of the family always watches them. Whenever I visit them, I see them too. I haven't seen the episode you're referring to, though.

As for the platform thing, I was really wondering how to make a wizard part of a regular Muggle port, but then I figured, why make it hard for myself? If they make a wizard part of a regular Muggle train station, they might employ a similar method at a port. It was something simple that I figured readers would understand easily. :)

Yes, I have killed off Audrey. :( But, in this story, Percy is 62 years old, so she didn't die super tragically young. I don't think I've mentioned the ages yet. I've actually written a chapter that goes before this one that I plan to edit in sometime, and it makes the ages/time more clear.

Thank you so much for reviewing!


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