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Review:fancy says:
This was so lovely! Honestly, a gorgeous little one shot. I love James/Lily don't you? Whenever I get a bit of writers block James and Lily always seem to set me straight. :)

I thought the initial sequence was great, how James and Sirius rebounded off one another and the fact they were doing work for Dumbledore reinforces the whole Order of the Phoenix cannon. The little mention of Remus and how they were thinking about him was also another great subtle addition which rounded out the story and the characters making it super believable.
What was devastating was when James said he would have a lifetime of Christmases with Harry, and that you'd named the chapter The Last Christmas. :( It was great, but so sad.
Also Lily's instalment and the reminder that they fit so well together that their patronus' match.
Oh, I thought this was wonderful. A great one-shot. Perfect!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks! It was so kind of you to offer to review, and i'm so thrilled you liked this ^_^

And yes, James/Lily are my OTP. I just love them so much, it's crazy.

Thanks again for this, i'm so glad you liked it. Your comments are great and have given me inspiration of things to try and incorporate into another story of mine.

So thrilled you liked it!
- A :)


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