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Review:Tonks1247 says:
“Is the part that gets exciting coming up next?” asked George innocently.”

Ahahaha, oh poor Percy. The only ones he has to recruit help from are his younger brothers and sister….and we all know how well that works. As if it wasn’t obvious when he was handing out assignment to them all, which was hilarious. I mean, Ginny was the most excited and then the most disappointed about the job she got; Fred and George were just….they were Fred and George; Ron was the eager little boy looking to please; And Percy being the proud and oh-so-responsible older brother. It just spells disaster.

And, adding in right here, as I don’t know if I’ve mentioned it before, you really have the characterization of these characters spot on. You seem to have this innate understanding of each of the characters and are able to age them backwards from how they act in the books. If that even makes sense…If not, I’m just trying to say that the way you write these characters matches perfectly with what they grow up to be. If that even made sense…

Moving on. My two favorite parts of this chapter include Percy making his cake and when Ginny came in with the sheet.

Percy making the cake was hilarious. He goes off thinking, ‘how hard can this be?’ Haha, oh how very innocent and naïve he is. Baking anything is not as easy as it looks. Very easy to mess up, which I’ve managed numerous times…But I did like how he used a bowl from breakfast and just sort of threw things together in it. It really would have been interesting to see what else he would have done with his cake dough. Though it partially terrifies me as to what it would come out as…not exactly edible, of course, but still would have been entertaining ;)

My other favorite part was with Ginny coming inside with the sheet. She keeps trying to say something and Percy cuts her off and doesn’t want to listen to her. Such a typical thing, the older kids not listening to the youngest. What do they know? xD Haha! But Ginny’s line of “Mum’s coming” said in that cheerful tone really made me laugh. I have had so many moments similar to that, and it just…it was adorable and just…it was great!

And overall, the entire chapter was great. Molly coming in and just laughing at the end was fantastic. Very expected, but it was still fantastic! Just like this chapter, which really was great! Can’t wait to read more!


Author's Response: I love Percy. ♥ Even when he's completely messing something up, he's always got that air of doing everything perfectly! So pompous and still so lovable. (You'll have to excuse this response, I'm dead tired!)

I'm so glad you find the characterization accurate, too! I love the Weasleys -- arguably some of my favorite characters in fiction -- and I try very hard to portray them accurately. :D

Thank you so much for leaving all of these wonderful reviews! It really is such a boost, and it means a lot to me that you do. :3 I'm so excited you were willing to do this for me!

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