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Review:inkbutterfly says:
This chapter was definetly my favourite out of them, with stuff happening, and Ben! I really liked him and I think I am getting a better idea of the history behind it and how the world is.
The one thing I didnt get was when he tried to warn them and was knocked out. I must have missed something becuase I didnt understand how what he said sounded so bad?
Anyway, its really good and I am looking forward to the next chapters! You dont normally write action, do you? I think this is a great acheivement then because action and things that are sort of dark like this are hard to do.
I am also curious to find out how the vampires and werewolves actually gained control and wiped out the witches/wizards...
Really, really brilliant!

-Kerryn xx

Author's Response: Hi again! This review made my day since I just read it now, and my day was long so this is much appreciated!!!

I'm glad you like Ben, 'cause so do I! ;) And good, that's great, I really wanted to explain a little more about what's going on and all that!

Oh, hmm, well the reason for that is because at that point they had captured Katrina, the Royal Princess, and they mistook him for someone who was trying to rescue her, so until they could figure out what to do they threw him in the cage next to her. It'll be explained though in the next chapter, but I should probably go in and clear that up a little bit, so thanks for pointing out that that was a bit confusing ^_^

Noo, I do not, though I love it now that I've tried it! Romance is my tried and true, though the first novel I ever put up on the site (that needs serious revisions because it's not my style at all anymore!) did feature some action in it! :)

Next chapter we'll hear a bit about Polluck's history! Bah! (Though it'll obviously be biased ;))

Thanks again my dear!


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