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Review:TenthWeasley says:
Hi, Hannah! I'm here with a rather tardy QTR review for you. :3

I was so, so pleased to see you had updated this story! I so enjoyed the first chapter when I read it a few months back, and the fact that you'd posted a second made me ridiculously excited. You characterize the Black sisters so well, and although they're children, it's very easy for me to glimpse the characters they become. Proud, conscious Bellatrix melds with clear-thinking Andromeda so well that it's difficult to see, apart from knowing about Ted Tonks, what might have ever forced them apart. But that's great, because in canon, you wouldn't ever pair them together. I just cannot get over how realistic every single one of your characters is, in everything I read of yours!

I'm so excited to see what you've got planned out for us -- how you'll bring these girls into the women we know from canon. I think I'm most anxious to know how you'll handle Andromeda's necessary break from her always-pure sisters, because I just cannot imagine it with how /magical/ Andy is here. I know you'll do it justice. :D You really do make them seem like sisters, not three characters linked by surnames they all end up shedding, anyway. There's that familial similarity there that links siblings in ways that you almost have to know firsthand to be aware of. :3

Love this chapter, Hannah, as always -- and I'll be watching for further updates! You write so well, and the Black sisters are not easy characters by any means, but yours are so natural as to seem effortless. ♥ Looking out for chapter three, and excellent job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad the characterization seemed to work out, because that's definitely one of the things I'm most worried about. Especially Bellatrix - she's a bit intimidating, haha! But it's a fun challenge. :)

I did - for once! - plan this out, so hopefully that will help me show the change naturally, because I do hope that I'll be able to explain how they end up falling out in the end. That's always been one of my favorite things about their story - trying to figure out how they went from being sisters to strangers.

Which is also why I wanted to show that they were linked more than just their surname - they were sisters first and foremost.

Thank you so much for such a lovely review! ♥ I hope to finish ch 3 soon. :)


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