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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Here's part 5 of our review swap!

This is fabulous!

I adore Lily and James stories and when I first started to read this I thought that it was going to be a Lily/Oc which would have made me really sad but as it went on I was sort of glad that everything didn't go well with Lily and David so that she finally got to date James despite not really liking him..

Their date is really sweet and how James tries to be a gentlemen to her is really just adorable and even though everything doesn't exactly go right (with him pushing her in too far) it is just one of those fluffy little romances and that is why I love it so much!

The fact that he also brought her that necklace was the cutest thing ever is just amazing. I love James so much and I wish I was Lily in this piece because he is actually so cute. That necklace sounded amazing and just how he was caring for her with the little note is amazing :D

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed my view of their first date and that you liked my james trying to be sweet. I knew that i wanted the necklace to mean a bit more as I was writing it so I pictured it being given by him as another way to show that he cares for her even when she didn't care for him. thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~

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