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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Hey :)

I've read the other two chapters of the story before and I think you're developing the plot really well throughout these three chapters especially by writing them in different view points and writing about little known characters whom you do have a lot of license to develop with them.

Audrey is one of the cutest children I have ever read about particularly because she is just a sweet child and she seems to be just so compliant with her mother and even attempting to speak to Theo which a lot of children are very shy about.

Tracey seems to like Theo very much since she is planning to go on more dates with him and I do like Theo because although the comment from the waitress was a little awkward he left as to try and make it a little less awkward.

I just really like this story and where you're going with this. There was just a couple of Americanism's I noticed such as calling chips 'fries' but it's not really a big deal since it's still understandable!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying this story! It really means a lot to me as it's not a pairing read very much! I love audrey, now if every child could just be like her.. lol. Thanks for pointing out the Americanism's I always forget to look and see what word I should use instead. Again i'm glad you like it! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. (side note I will be getting to your reviews soon)

~Slytherinchica08~


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