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Review:EverDiggory says:
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I love you portray them it's wonderful. The characterization and effort you've put into it is absolutely delightful.

Your flow is wonderful, and I love it. It's beautifully done.

I think you did an amazing take on the whole Sirius and his pureblood issue. I'm sad Sirius didn't originally just be a noble,Slytherin pureblood. It's such a waste,but that's just my snottyness kicking in(;

You did a good job, and I'm immediately liking Sirius(; haha!

I really like how James was close to driving his mom insane, and then they were going to join up and officially drive her off the edge. I love it, it's just how I imagined them.

You've done brilliant,and while I don't see any grammar,spelling,or wording issues, if you'd like a beta,let me know(: I love betaing stories that I love because I get to read it a few days earlier;D

Great job!

xoxo

Ever

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

I am happy to know that my grammar, spelling and wording issues are better this time around with this story. I was a bit worried about how this story would be perceived, but I am glad to know that it flowed well despite the meaness of the chapter.

It is disappointing that Sirius didn't follow the grain, but I don't think he would have made for as interesting of a character if he hadn't. James and Sirius are a combination of crazy. I thought of Dear Old Mrs. Potter as one of those parents who can't wait until summer vacations are over and their kids go back to school. Add Sirius on top and the pranking ensues. =)

Thank you for the positive feed back. I greatly appreciate it. I also PMed you about Beta-ing. =)

-SR17


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