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Review:Owlpost68 says:
lol I picked this one to review 'cause it reminded me of the James/Lily one-shot I did :)
This was very cute, I kinda wish there were more description of the setting around them 'cause it seemed that it was one event after another. Another tip is to try rereading it and see if the dialog seems natural. Unfortunately there were a few parts I felt that could use some work. Otherwise it was a lovely idea, and there were many sweet moments, like them discussing the necklace, and it was too funny when he pushed her chair in! lol. Really great job :)
Congrats getting your 600th review!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this oneshot. I know there is still stuff that needs to be fixed but I had wrote this as a Christmas present and wanted to get it out as soon as possible for the person since it was already well after christmas. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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