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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Hm an interesting chapter!

There is a lot of dialogue in this so you may want to consider adding in more description to really set the scene and actually make us believe this more.

I like the plot line in it though, making Hermione and Draco head boy and head girl. It makes us wonder what is going to be going on between them and whether they are going to get a lot closer whilst they are.

Draco having a little brother is interesting as is pairing Ron with Pansy! I love it!

Can't wait to see where you go with this!

Author's Response: Yeah this one is really my baby! My first attempt ever at fanfiction and there is a lot that needs to be fixed. I took it down a while ago and then put it back up so that I can go through and fix what needs to be done with it such as too much conversations like you pointed out! The plot i absolutely love as well as I feel that it is original besides the head girl head boy bit as that is done many times with dramiones. Draco's little brother will come into play later on in the story as well to help the plot along! I'm really glad you enjoyed this and I hope someday to actually get around to fixing this story up! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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