Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Hm an interesting chapter!

There is a lot of dialogue in this so you may want to consider adding in more description to really set the scene and actually make us believe this more.

I like the plot line in it though, making Hermione and Draco head boy and head girl. It makes us wonder what is going to be going on between them and whether they are going to get a lot closer whilst they are.

Draco having a little brother is interesting as is pairing Ron with Pansy! I love it!

Can't wait to see where you go with this!

Author's Response: Yeah this one is really my baby! My first attempt ever at fanfiction and there is a lot that needs to be fixed. I took it down a while ago and then put it back up so that I can go through and fix what needs to be done with it such as too much conversations like you pointed out! The plot i absolutely love as well as I feel that it is original besides the head girl head boy bit as that is done many times with dramiones. Draco's little brother will come into play later on in the story as well to help the plot along! I'm really glad you enjoyed this and I hope someday to actually get around to fixing this story up! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Submit Report:  





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net