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Review:Elenia says:
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Ooh, this was such a beautiful one-shot. It was so brilliantly written and so full of emotion. Awesome work.

I think you made James and Lily seem very true to their character. I really liked it how James was constantly amazed about Lily and how much he loved her, you made his feelings seem so real.

All the little details you managed to slip here were also great. I especially liked the beginning where James was concerned about muggles learning Divination and his joke about McGonagall. I think they fit his character really well along with the concerns about Snape.

Good job! You're a really talented writer (:

~Elenia

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! It was definitely a challenge for me and I've been happy to hear how well people think it turned out. I apologize that my response took so long!

I don't think I'd ever really written James before this piece, and I was surprised by how easy it was for me to get inside his head. Lily, of course, is an old favorite. I never get tired of exploring the nooks and crannies of her personality :)

It's great to see that the small moments of levity worked for you, too. I wanted to use them to lighten up an otherwise dark piece.

Thanks again so very much!

Amanda

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