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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Hey :)

I really do like this chapter because it shows that not even the Weasley family is perfect in whatever they do. Fleur to me seems a little OOC with having favourite children and being dismissive of Victoire when she's at school even though I love her detestation and disapproval for Hogwarts.

Victoire seems to be a very genuine character with her sticking with her friends and not really getting to involved with the lads but you also give us information about her life in this chapter by saying that she's a Gryffindor and that Teddy is a prefect.

My only criticism is that you said Victoire was a quater Veela rather than an eighth but that's not really a big deal!

Well done a nice chapter!

Author's Response: Hi!

I was focused on trying to make the Weasley's not perfect, so maybe I did go a bit overboard with Fleur, but I think that in the books, she's a bit volatile anyways. But I do see your point.

Hmm, I guess I made a mistake about the Veela part. You're right, of course! I probably was thinking about Fleur when I wrote it, and didn't think to change it for her daughter! Thanks for catching that!

I appreciate your review. :D


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