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Review:Withering says:
Ugh, I'm so sorry, I'm reviewing again. Just ignore the last one, it wasn't long enough and certainly didn't do justice to your lovely story.
OK, I'm going to super honest.. wait for it... I've been here every two hours since the day-before-yesterday, hoping there's been an update!! No fanfiction has EVER done this to me before, so you can guess how much I love your story. Y u no update before a fortnight? :/ OK, OK, I'm going to stop hounding you about that now.
I actually love Claryce. I know she seems annoying and over-protective, and even a bit selfish when she tries to keep Daniel from going after Lily, but I understand. And though Remus called her selfish, he'd probably have done the same thing if it were James or Sirius who's girlfriend didn't really worry about their well-being! And I LOVE Clar's "boys". I really hope you include more of them, even if they ARE OCs.

Gerty- well, let's say I'm DEFINITELY not an anti-Beck. I love her too (but then, I love all four of them). It's just nice to see how you haven't made her a complete biatch. And also, I almost expected the Gryffindor to be Lily, and it was refreshing to see it someone so unlike your typical Gryffindor.
I just hope Sirius and Gerty become friends again. As a couple, they wouldn't go, but as friends, they were nice. And Gerty'll be needing a few friends around now, especially since Logan's said they're "not over yet". Sounds... ominous.
Logan... um... well, Logan's scary. He's got this mysterious thing going on, sure, but he's seems so unpredictable and unstable- he's scarier than Lucius because no one really knows what he's going to do next. Gerty, Logan... Well, just don't let him hurt her, OK?! *puppy-eyes*

Ara: She's cute with Sirius, but as a couple, it just doesn't seem right enough. I really hope she isn't just a whim, a passing phase of his, because she's so sweet and innocent, I don't want her upset. I mean, she WOULD be perfect as Sirius's closest friend or his #1 Girl. But as a girlfriend?
BUT. BUT, I think if you DO want Sirius and Ara together, you can pull it off perfectly. Your story's so beautifully unpredictable, I'm sure you'll be able to portray Sirius and Ara's relationship so well it'll seem real.

And Audrey- I love her relationship with Regulus. He's portrayed so well, and that's why I love your story. You've explored every character so well- even the minor ones like Millie- and all your main characters have their flaws, and that's what makes them so believable and easy to relate to.

Well, I thought I knew who I wanted to go with whom, but now I'm not so sure. Just.. try and put Clar with one of the marauders (excluding Peter, of course. I don't like Wormtail. Can you blame me?)

Can't wait! I'll be checking everyday until the next update. Make it ASAP and I LOVE YOUR STORY.
Oh, btw, your poster. The blonde is Ara, the black-haired girl is Gerty, Keira Knightley( Ithink) is Claryce and the last one's Audrey? Just asking. I love doing the whole who's-who thing.

Author's Response: Hahaha. Hello again! Wow. Thanks so much for such a long, amazing review. I love it! :D

Can't respond to every point, because then I'd be giving out spoilers and I'm sure you don't want to know who Clar/Ara/Sirius will end up with (if anyone :P). But thanks so much for your thoughts. Some of it is quite spot on too and hopefully that'll become clear in future chapters. Only thing is, there's *so much* still to come that may be a few chapters down the line.

Logan is unstable. I very much agree. No further comment required :P

I actually like Audrey/Regulus more than I expected to. There's a stillness about their relationship that is quite nice to explore. So I'm glad you're enjoying it :) And so flattered that you think I've explored each character well :) Also love that you appreciate their flaws e.g. in Claryce but like them anyway! (Basically, I love your entire review and am flattered by everything you've said and you're making me blush :P)

You're spot on about the girls in the banner. Although, I should add that in my head Keira Knightley is nothing like how Clar looks. I just couldn't find anybody even vaguely similar to the description in my head so went for any ole brunette :/

Oh, and about the next chapter.. I'm going to be really honest and hope it doesn't make you stop reading but I don't think I'll be able to get it up super quickly. I'm hoping to write it in the next couple weeks so by the time it's been validated it'll *hopefully* be up by the end of the month. Sorry.. I'm not so great with the updating but when I do it's usually a nice, long chapter :)

Thanks again for the amazing review! It really does make a difference to know somebody's out there and interested in what's going on :)

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