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Review:Aderyn says:
Hello :D

This is a very cute and well written piece. You managed to write something fluffy, but still have it be touching--a great Valentine's Day one-shot.

I love how you manage to tell Luna and Rolf's story in just a few thousand words. I feel like you were very efficient in your use of language in order to tell of their life with children, and their first encounter.

I think you picked the perfect way to tell this story--in moments. These little flashes, or memories are often how we remember our loved ones. And they all seem to be moments of pure happiness and joy in life.

I think the last line really sums up the moments in the rest of the story, and explain why Rolf is so happy to simply watch his wife.

I honestly don't have much critique for this piece. Great job, and I really enjoyed reading it :)

Author's Response: Hi! I was trying to drown people in fluff and it seems that it worked pretty well.

To be honest, I was worried about the flashes of memories because it would be disjointed so to hear that it was the "perfect way" makes me feel so squishy inside! :)

Gah! This was such a nice review! Thank you!!


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