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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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So i really enjoyed the first chapter of this story, and now I'm back and pleased to see that the second chapter did not disapoint!

I;m really enjoying the variety of setting in the story so far. Victorian London, futuristic NYC and 1600's Paris are all so fascinating, and you made good use of them.

I loved the amount of suspense that has ocurred so far. The plot is movingalong really quickly, and I'm anxious to find out the significance of the stone and why he's going to such lengths to obtain it.

And wow he's a vampire. Its nice to read a story about vampires that's actually good, unlike a certain other series that I won't mention.

Great job so far, I'd love to read more when you write it!

Author's Response: Yay! There are a few shifts in time like that, so I'm glad you're enjoying that.

Ah, the stones. Their significance will be known soon enough. :)

YES! I love vampires, so I love that Tristan is one in this story. And thank you, but we will never mention that series...

I've almost finished the next chapter. Thanks for the review.


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