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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
I really liked this chapter. It flowed nicely. I didn't read any sentences that I had to re read to try to make sense of which is good.

I was surprised when it was Mrs. Malfoy that was on the bed in the ward rather then someone else. I knew you were going to introduce Draco, but I wasn't expecting him to be at St. Mungos. It's nice to see the Post War Draco rather then the Pre War Draco. Yes, he still has his sneer, but I think that's something that will never change. He seems softer, more inquisitive. Which is a welcome change.

Hermione was again spot on. I loved how you incorporated her muggle born traits into her job. Yes, she's a witch and excessivly bright, but she still cherishes her roots. She's in a position that one can relate to because everyone knows someone or has heard of someone who has been in a comatose state.

I am still wondering about Ron and what happened. I like how there is still an air of mystery to this story. I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep up the great work. =)

-SR17

Author's Response: I'm glad that there was nothing that confused you. Sometimes my fingers move faster than my brain and things just slip through.

I wanted to show everyone the dynamic between Hermione and Draco before the story got really into it. There is going to be a lot of changing for the both of them so I figured it would be better to show you all now rather than later and rush it all. Post War Draco is somewhat a more mature Pre War Draco. He is still a little ferret but he's getting better slowly.

Every time you tell me my Hermione is good I get little goose bumps. XD Females in general are hard for me to write, especially sad ones, so it makes me happy that I am doing a beloved character so well. And yes, I chose to keep her doing muggle-like things in memory of her parents, which you will get to see later on.

Ron's situation will be revealed within the next couple of chapters so you wont need to wait for much longer.

Thanks for coming by again. (:


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