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Review:charlottetrips says:
A solid start I must say. It's interesting to read of Victoire as slighted in her family, not the perfect girl that she's made out to be and thinking of Teddy as her cousin (sort of)! That raised my eyebrows a bit. I like that you're taking a less traveled road on that (unless I missed something on the pairings of this story...oh well).

It was a good intro, inserting us into the family at this time in her life, showing that everything isn't perfect all the time just because the books are over and also getting us familiar with her friends. There was a certain ease to reading this!

xChar

Author's Response: Hello!

I'm glad you mostly liked the start of the story. I was trying, back when I started this story, to go anti-cliche. Victoire isn't the golden girl, she and Teddy aren't obviously in love, etc.

I guess that's a bit of a pattern in my stories: not everything is perfect, and not everything is as neat and tidy in life.

Thanks for the review!


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